Today, we have a special post from Pierre, an Intermediate student
here at the ELC. He wrote this paragraph in his Intermediate Writing
class with Jane. Thanks for sharing your writing, Pierre!
If I won $5,000,000, I would buy an island and live there with my family. I would have a big house at the top of the mountain, a farm in the grassland next to the river, and an animal reserve in the forest.
In my house, I would like to have a swimming pool, a lot of bathrooms and bedrooms, and also a technological kitchen. One of the living rooms, would have a big window to see the island and I would have a painting workshop in the top of a tower on my house.
Next, in the farm, I would have enough food production to eat without outside help. In my animal reserve, there would be a lot of endangered animals and I would like to preserve them.
Ha, I almost forgot! The beaches would be beautiful, and everything would be in perfect harmony with the nature. This island would be called "Esperance."
Ashley's note: What would you do if you had $5 million? Leave a comment below and tell us how you would spend your money!
Great post, Pierre!
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-pay off all of my bills, my brother's bills, and my parents' bills
-put $1,000,000 into a trust fund for my future children to inherit
-open a language, culture, and arts school for at-risk children in Hampton Roads... complete with a community garden
-put a garden and/or solar energy system on the roof of my house
-buy a solar powered electric scooter
-fund a project for the city of Norfolk to make more bike lanes!
Thank you Laura,
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Great paragraph! Very interesting, if I have $5000000, I would buy a house for my family and one for myself. Then I will go travel around the world.
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